Part 0ne: HideawayThe main idea in this part is Neil Cady and his Sister, Bree , come and live with their Aunt's ( Claire and Anna ) because their dad and mom split up because their dad wanted to persue his movie dream and their mom started to go into a deep depression and became mentally ill to the point where she couldn't take care of her own children. So she asked the aunts if they could come and live with them. The aunts agreed, so now Bree and Neil are living in Hedston instead of New Jersey. Anyways, Neil and his friend Wesley decide to go and visit Graylock, the rumor is you can hear Nurse Janet walking around. Well, it was orginally just suppose to be them two but Bree and Eric, Wesley's older brother, decided to tag along. When they arrived at Graylock, they went to explore but then that exploring turned into a frightning experienced. Eric left the group and Bree wasn't anywhere to be found until her brother found her in room 13. When Neil tried to get his siter out of the room the door closed and wouldn't open. Well, Neil decided to turn on his camer , because the flashlight ran out of batteries, and when he did that they say a young woman in the room with them. They start freaking out and after along time of screaming for Wesley he finally finds his way and opens the door. They decided that enough wasenough and decide to find their way out of the hospital. Running in a maze of dark hallways and climbing stairs , they heard what sound like high heels clicking on the floor so they thought it was Nurse Janet coming after them, so they start running again. They came to this room where the woodenfloors were weak so Neil feel through and cut his leg majorly. Eric found a secret passage way , so the group decide to follow that passage way out. Finally they made it out. While walking back to the road to go home , a man by the name of Andy came out of the woods. Asked them what they were doing back there, they answered and Andy relized how badly cut up Neil's leg was and took him to doctor Dr.Simon. While they group was waiting in the room for Neil to come out, Eric took out the file he stoled from Graylock which contained of medical records and doctors notes. When Neil was done getting treated he came out with Dr.Simon and Dr.Simon saw the file on the table and confiscated it from the children. The aunts had a little get together and the kids started to talk about what they experienced from Graylock. Well Gladys overheard what they were saying . Neil and Wesley went to the playground to review their evidence from the night before, well when Neil was looking through his pics 3 new pictures that he didnt take came poping up on his camera : a piano,fireplace and deer antlers. When they were about to leave Neil said it felt like someone was pushing him on the swing and when he looked back he saw a woman dressed in white. The boys wanted to do more research about Nurse Janet so they went to the library and researched her. but a nurse janet was showing up but a Janet Rielly was. Well, Gladys works at the library and told them that Janet Rielly's lives in a retirement home and they could call Whispering Knoll where she lives.
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Part Two: Drowning DreamsThe kids decided to take a trip to Whispering Knoll to ask Janet Rielly some questions. Bree decided not to go, but as Neil,Wesley and Eric were about to leave Bree said " Im coming." Neil asked her what changed her mind and she said that when she was reading it felt like she should look up and when she did a woman in white was standing in the alley and the woman said to Bree to go and so she did. When they arrived at the retirement home they meet Janet Rielly and started asking her questions about Graylock. Well it turns ut that Janet Rielly or Nurse Janet didn't kill the children that everyone was blaming her because they died on her watch. Well her son Nicholas Rielly came back from making his phone call and said that the kids need to go and stop asking his mom questions. The Aunts wanted to watch the stars, Neil decided to go , but Bree decided to take a bath. While gazing up at the stars they herard a scream. They ran up the stairs to the bathroom but the door wouldnt opening and Bree wasnt answering after a couple of minutes shouting for Bree she finally opens the door. Neil asked what the scream was for and Bree said she feel asleep in the bath. Neil knew that wasn't true. Bree told him later that night that while she was in the bath rinsing her hair she couldnt get up like someone was holding her down. She opened her eyes and looked around her and all around her was darkness. She could see a light coming from the shore and saw a person standing there, instead of the person helping her they pushed her pressed her down deeper in the water.
The next day Neil and Wesley wanted answer . So they snuck away from the house and went to Graylock. While walking they came to a small office, when they went in there they started looking for medical files and important information. While searching Wesley heard something, the hinges to the door started squeaking . The boys werent alone. They saw a girl with long brown hair walking in a long dirty white dress. So they started freaking out, turns out it was only Bree. Neil noticed a file laying on the floor, Neil picked it up and looked through it. Turns out the file belongs to a girl named Rebecca Smith. Rebecca was in Graylock for a major depression and her room was room 13. They came to the conclusion that Rebecca was thie ghost. Later that night Bree and Neil's dad calls and leaves a message - I've got a bg surprise that I'm sure will make you very happy. I'm busy tonight, but we'll talk in a couple of days. Love too you all. While looking throught the files they saw a very familiar name - Dr.Julius Simon , the one who bandage Neil's leg is the one who ordered for Rebecca's test. The next morning Nel was at work for Aunt Claire's pie shop with Bree when he decided to go to Dr.Simon's office. When he arrived he asked Simon's mother if he could see Simon she asked what for and he said his leg. Then she asked if he has been cleaning it and Neil replied he has been trying. Then Simon asked his mom who is it ? steping towards the door he realized it was Neil and invited him in . Once in the " white room " Neil asked Simon if he remembers Rebecca he replied i cant talk about my patients . Later in the coversation Dr.Simon asked what he knew about Rebecca? Neil said that he knew hat she died at Graylock. Shocked. Dr.Simon asked him how he knew that? and Neil said that Rebecca told him. ''Did Rebecca metion that she was terrified of the dark? or that lightning storms sent her into a panic? Did she say she never learned how to swim? Did she tell you hoe easy it was to slip out of the hospital?To get lost in the reeds? To mistakenly wander into the water? " Bree was trying out for band sense she plays the Viola, Neil and Wesley's job was to sneak up to Melissa's room and grab the earliest yearbooks because you can see Rebeeca. So they snuck around back, went upstairs to Melissa's to found the yearbooks. They heard someone coming, so they hide in the closet. They heard someone coming , walk to the bookcase , stop , turn around and walk to the closet where they were and was looking in. Neil couldnt see any facial features and then he smelt an awful smell and then he realized that it was Rebecca. Melissa came into the room, flicked on her light and Rebecca was gone. Then the bookshelve fell and Melissa ran out of the room and so did the boys not long after. While fliping through the pages in the yearbook Bree came to a Memorial of a Principal that died, Alice Curtains. But Alice was more than a principal she was Rebeeca's mom. Rebecca wrote a poem that said : For My Mother "Do you remember the way home?" she always asks,like A woman in a fairy tale protecting her Daughter from the Dangers of the world "Yes," i reminded her Dutifully, as I step into the woods, haunted by Desire for certaintly and her dread. I promised to leave a trail of clues In the dark, for her or me or someonne who follows. The bread crumbs glow. None of us is alone. So their dad flew in from California to New Jersey just to come visit. And tells them that the want to pack their stuff because he wants them to move with him. The Aunt's and the dad decided to go to eat to have a discussion. While they were alone Neil was looking at the poem and realized that if you read the poem down it says" Daddy did it." A crash of lightning came and the power went out after that they heard what sounded like someone was walking in the attic. All of a sudden the tv flashed on and it showed them the pictures the deer antlers,a fireplace,and a piano but the last picture that wasnt there before was blood. After the picture flashed it turned off and went back to pitch black darkness, the the front door opened as if somebody had opened it, Neil closed it , then they heard what sounded like someone was walking in the dining room. Another creaked came from the hallway and a deep voice said " Rebecca...? Come here sweetheart." Another footstep. The voice said again " Rebecca ..., you're safe now. Come out, darling.'' Another footstep. " Rebecca...?" After they heard that Neil grabbed his sisters hand andn ran towards the barn because inside the barn there is a landline. While running Bree tripped and a flash of lightning came, Neil say a dark shadow next to the house. " REBECCA!!!" Once in the barnNeil grabbed the phone, pulled out the piece of paper in his poicket that contained Andy's number and called it. Andy came to the hpouse picked up the kids and was driving to his house. Neill looked back and saw a dark shadow following them and he still heard the man calling out for Rebecca. |
Part Three: Pins and NeedlesOnce they arrived at Andy's house they told him everything that happened. From them getting locked in room 13 to the man chasing them. Andy believed them and Neil asked if they could contact Ghostly Investigation. Andy got up and went into a room, they followed him. They heard a plink plink plink of Andy brushing up against the piano. Bree noticed something and tapped Neil, Neil looked and above the fireplace was deer antlers. Neil asked iof he could use his phone to call his aunt's. While walking over to the phone he looked to the side of him and saw a framed document with the name Andy Curtain. Andy told him that the relationship between Alice was complicated but he thought of Rebecca has his daughter.He grabbed the fire poker and told the kids that the relationship didnt last long. Then a vision came over Neil , Andy was argueing with Alice ad Rebecca was in the doorway trembling with fear. Then he saw Alice laying on the ground with her hair knotted in blood . Rebecca ran to her mom and was saying you pushed her. Andy grabbed rRebecca's bicep and said she slipped and then he said to promise me you wont tell. Then the vision ended. Andy started questioning the kids askin gthem who else knows. they answered that no one else knows. Andy was getting mad at the kids. Later on Andy volunteered to drive the kids home, but while they were walking Neil realized that he didnt put the fire poker back and if they got in the car with Andy that Andy wouldnt be drivng them home. So Neil grabbed his sisiters hand and they ran through the woods towards Graylock. While heading towards the road a pair ofheadlights flashed and Andy's truck was turned off. The kids reluctantly went into the water where Rebecca died to get away from Andy. Wading through the weeds and the mud, they heard Andy curse under his breath because his truck died. Still in the water they heard a swoosh sound and Andy was behind them using the poker to cut through the thick weeds. Neil noticed that his sister was sinking from the mud but just before her hands went under something pushed her out of the water and onto the embankment. Neil was starting to sink when something fleshy brushed by his leg, soon a dark shade appeared next to him, said shhh and tossed him on the embankment. Running . They finally arrived at the youth ward,which is part of Graylock,opened the door and closed it but soon they heard hard boots walking outside and theen someone tried to open the door but Neil had the handle and Bree was using her force to hold the door but she couldnt hold it any longer so they let go, and Any went flying backwards. Running through a maze of darkness with Andy on their tail. Well, Andy lost sight of them but he was looking for another way. Neil and Bree went down to the Gym but it was flooded because of the rain so they went hrough the secret passage way that Eric found on their first trip her. The find their way into the room where Neil fell through. Then they heard boots running up to the room where they were. So they were hiding behind the rolled up rug so Andy wouldnt see them. Well Neil decided to stand up because he had a plan and when he stood up Rebecca appeared and said " Daddy .. Why? " and then she disappeared. Shocked Andy called out for his daughter with no luck, he final realized that Neil was standing up so he went after him and Bree with the poker. While having an arguement Neil said " Bree, Go!" and she kicked the window and broke the glass so they could jump,but they were to late and Andy got Neil with the poker in the neck. Bree called out for her brother but he was to weak to move. Hanging on to a piece of wood floor plank -so he wouldnt fall through the hole - Rebecca returned this time with no remourse. Rebecca put her heel to the floor and the floor gave in and feel through. All Bree heard was a big splash of water. She jumped from the window, landed on the ground and looked for another window to find to break to get her brother out. Bree found a window next to the boared up one and broke it, she jumped in the water and jumped in to find her brother. Scared that Andy might grab her and stab her, she searched in a panic. Finally, she found her brother on a table. She maneuvered the table to the window and climbed her way out and then grabbed and dragged her brother over the threshold. She noticed an arm and saw that Andy was facing face down and he wasnt breathing. Bree was trying to wake her borther up and seconds later Neil was waking up. The news of Andy's death spread around in a couple of days. Several months after returning to New Jersey Neil and Bree kept in ouch with Eric and Wesley. Linda , Bree and Neil's mom , continued to see her doctor. One night Neil got a phone call and a woman on the other side of the phone said that Alexi and Max of Ghostly Investigation heard about his experience in Hedston and they want to do a show about Graylock. Would you and your sister be interested in speaking with them?
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